NAPOMO, Day 5: Genesis
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tree_and_leafA geeky one...
Genesis
(for J R R Tolkien)
In the beginning were the words,
Aristocratic, cryptic, chromatic.
Vowels as direct as mid-day,
Consonants lanky as long-swords.
Mouths materialized to speak the words:
Leafshaped lips for the high language,
Tranquil tongues for the tree-creatures,
Slits and slobbers for the lower orders.
Deeds came next, words' children.
Legs by walking evolved a landscape.
Continents and chronologies occurred,
Complex and casual as an implication.
Arched over all, alarming nimbus,
Magic's disorderly thunder and lightning.
The sage sat in his suburban fastness,
Garrisoned against progress. He grieved
At what the Duke's men did to our words
(Whose war memorial is every signpost).
The sage sat. And middle-earth
Rose around him like a rumour.
Grave grammarians, Grimm and Werner,
Gave it laws, granted it charters.
The sage sat. But the ghosts walked
Of the Birmingham schoolboy, the Somme soldier,
Whose bones lay under the hobbit burrows,
Who endured darkness, and friends dying,
Whom words waylaid in a Snow Hill siding,
Coal truck pit names, grimy, gracious,
Blaen-Rhondda, Nantyglo, Senghenydd.
In these deeps middle-earth was mined.
These were the words in the beginning.
U A Fanthorpe.
Genesis
(for J R R Tolkien)
In the beginning were the words,
Aristocratic, cryptic, chromatic.
Vowels as direct as mid-day,
Consonants lanky as long-swords.
Mouths materialized to speak the words:
Leafshaped lips for the high language,
Tranquil tongues for the tree-creatures,
Slits and slobbers for the lower orders.
Deeds came next, words' children.
Legs by walking evolved a landscape.
Continents and chronologies occurred,
Complex and casual as an implication.
Arched over all, alarming nimbus,
Magic's disorderly thunder and lightning.
The sage sat in his suburban fastness,
Garrisoned against progress. He grieved
At what the Duke's men did to our words
(Whose war memorial is every signpost).
The sage sat. And middle-earth
Rose around him like a rumour.
Grave grammarians, Grimm and Werner,
Gave it laws, granted it charters.
The sage sat. But the ghosts walked
Of the Birmingham schoolboy, the Somme soldier,
Whose bones lay under the hobbit burrows,
Who endured darkness, and friends dying,
Whom words waylaid in a Snow Hill siding,
Coal truck pit names, grimy, gracious,
Blaen-Rhondda, Nantyglo, Senghenydd.
In these deeps middle-earth was mined.
These were the words in the beginning.
U A Fanthorpe.
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Date: 2009-04-05 09:13 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-04-05 02:51 pm (UTC)You haven't come across any of her religious verse, then?
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Date: 2009-04-05 01:49 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-04-05 02:54 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-04-05 06:51 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-04-05 08:35 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-04-05 08:03 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2009-04-05 08:33 pm (UTC)Glad you enjoyed, anyhow.
*BOGGLES*
Date: 2009-04-06 02:03 am (UTC)Sub-creation, indeed.
I want footnotes!
*off to google*