The story was actually good, if you discounted one rather gratuitous sex scene (not one of the cases where you'd have lost something with a fade-to-black), and the fact that it would have been better served as o-fic with original characters than an Harry Potter AU.
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Date: 2008-11-03 12:17 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-11-03 12:17 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2008-11-03 12:22 am (UTC)The story was actually good, if you discounted one rather gratuitous sex scene (not one of the cases where you'd have lost something with a fade-to-black), and the fact that it would have been better served as o-fic with original characters than an Harry Potter AU.