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tree_and_leaf ([personal profile] tree_and_leaf) wrote2008-09-16 09:19 pm
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Their first meeting with the Professor had been frankly embarrassing, thought Peter, and that had been Ewald's fault, too. The old man had sent a cart to meet them at the railway station, so their first sight of him had been of a small figure waiting outside the house as they rattled up the stony hill road, past the vineyards and through the pastures and then through trees. "How lovely", Suse had whispered, "this is a bit better than stewing in Berlin all summer," and Lucie, wide eyed, had asked "Do you think there'll be bears?"

"There aren't any left in the Black Forest, silly," said Ewald. "I'd rather see a wolf."

The driver tugged at the reins, said something they couldn't quite understand. The horse stopped, and they got their first proper look at their host, a tall, thin, slightly forbidding man with a white beard. The children clambered down, all of them feeling rather uncertain. Then Lucie stepped forward, and made a hesitant curtsey.

"Good afternoon, Professor," she said politely. "Or – Gruß Gott, that's what you say down here, isn't it?"

He laughed, and suddenly seemed much less frightening, and took Lucie's hand with a surprisingly courtly gesture. "Quite right – you must be Lucie? Hello, children."

"Gruß Gott,"said Suse, a little self-consciously, and followed Lucy's example in curtseying. Peter, too, said, Gruß Gott, and stuck out his hand. "I'm Peter, this is Suse, and this is Ewald…"

Ewald, who had been regarding them all suspiciously, did not give the Professor his hand, but raised it in a crisp salute (much crisper, thought Peter, than he could have managed at Ewald's age). "Heil Hitler, Professor."

"Good afternoon," said the Professor, and his face shut down. "You must excuse me, Ewald, I'm afraid I'm a little old-fashioned." But his tone had not been apologetic in the least, and Ewald had turned white, as if he had been struck, and his eyes had grown hot.
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[personal profile] gramarye1971 2008-09-16 08:25 pm (UTC)(link)
...you don't get to stop here. Oh, no.

[identity profile] emily-shore.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
How remarkable. Yes. Please continue.

You're not the only one who writes dark AUs, you know. I had my AU-Beatles-fic-where-the-Germans-occupied-Liverpool, if that makes you feel any better...

[identity profile] parrot-knight.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
More applause here. Excellent last sentence.

[identity profile] themolesmother.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 08:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm, intriguing. Please don't stop.

MM

[identity profile] nineveh-uk.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 08:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Hurray! Do keep going... (I like Ewald's "I'd rather see a wolf". Very Edmund.)

[identity profile] mk-tortie.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 09:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, yes! You have to carry this on...

[identity profile] sacred-sarcasm.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 09:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, how amazing! I didn't think you'd acually write it. You are going to continue, aren't you?

(I must admit that early exposure to EBD means I find it very odd to see Gruss Gott - sorry, not sure how to do characters - without some wittering about it being charmingly courteous)

[identity profile] angevin2.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 11:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I can't wait to see where this goes. *shudder*
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[personal profile] owl 2008-09-16 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this is really good :)

[identity profile] scionofgrace.livejournal.com 2008-09-16 11:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow.

Hate to say it, but I'd love to read the rest.

[identity profile] dolorous-ett.livejournal.com 2008-09-17 09:16 am (UTC)(link)
What a beginning! I don't want to wreck your academic prospects or anything, but I would love to see more of this!

[identity profile] ms-wanderlust.livejournal.com 2008-09-17 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh good grief....you have to go on! That last sentence is painfully "leading on to the next thing", if you see what I mean.

[identity profile] lareinenoire.livejournal.com 2008-12-30 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
How on earth did I miss this? One way or another, I did, and I'm so glad you linked to it. I'm afraid I'm incredibly fascinated and must beg you to write more. :)